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Looking for feedback on your photo? This is the place. Comments should be honest, but constructive.
Wanted to start off the "critique blog." Thoughts on this photo? I cropped it from the original and posted both. I think the 2nd one looks pretty good. Thoughts?
Blonde poise

Blonde Poise
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